Thursday, September 27, 2012

Isolation

Remember yesterday's post about all that writing? Well, Azia's comment was something I've thought about before, but from a slightly dystopian perspective.

"It's a very romantic thought... isn't it? Part of me is very interested in what writing for 14 hours straight would feel like."

I know exactly how it would look, and I've done this before. Not here, but in notebooks. Wondering what would happen to someone that is isolated in a situation for an extended period of time. This is (similar to) what I always come up with when I write these:

Day 1. Isolated. Locked down. I'm not sure what happened, but it seems like the end of the world. Went looting today, well...tried anyway. Everyone else had the same idea. Except while they went for the electronics that won't work, I went for food and water. Resting now and going back out after dark.

Day 2. Broke into the pharmacy last night. It was untouched. Scored everything from birth control to morphine to amoxicillin. Grabbed the cigarettes, too.

Day 5. Something exploded nearby. Shook the entire house. Pretty sure it was a propane tank at the trailer park down the road. Sounded like debris falling from the sky shortly afterward. The neighbors have one, too. Best to get my hands on some of it and drain the tank so the same thing doesn't happen here.

Day 14. All the perishable food is gone. Should have traded it early. Nothing but compost now. Canned goods and bottled water. No word from the government.

Day 22. Was chased today. They were people, but they were jumpy and had guns. Made it home and barricaded in. I don't think they followed me.

Day 24. I was wrong. They followed me and now they're trying to get it. Sucks to be them. Pretty well hunkered down here. Plenty of canned goods and bottled drinks to last a month-long siege. Fortification for the win!

Day 36. After several days they tried to set my house on fire. MY HOUSE! I showed them. I built this place to keep the world out. They kept coming, so I made some bombs out of the propane I had left from the neighbors tank. Probably shouldn't have drained it. Did the trick, though. Two explosions and they haven't been back. It's been two days so far, and I can't see anything outside except those two bodies. Don't dare go outside.

Day 44. I heard a scratching, I know I did. Trried to look outside but seen othing. Day and night the god damn scratching!

day 48. scratch scratch scratch its coming from the floor i swear it is. Something unnnnder the houss. their trying to get in not in my head, albert, so stop saying that.

day 63 they took my food cameright through the wlalls and take it all rite off my head and taks my food.
Some survivalist. Some paranoia. With a healthy dose of getting a little like Gollum at the end.

It is what it is, right?

Word to the Nerd

24 comments:

DEZMOND said...

I lurv all this looting, can I go too?

Tasha Seegmiller said...

This is intriguing. I love the transition and I think you have really hit it spot on. Things to think about today...

Stephanie D said...

Well done, now let the dog in and the scratching will go away!
:)

Alex J. Cavanaugh said...

Very effective! Could really feel his plight.

Pickleope said...

This was great. It would make a really good short story. If not maddening.

Laura said...

I like this, especially the end where it starts to look like he's going a little crazy! There's an award for you on my blog :)
http://mybafflingbrain.blogspot.co.uk/2012/09/reader-appreciation-award.html

smedette said...

Love this.

Azia said...

as soon as i read your email... i internet-ran over to your blog! you are an incredible writer- just in case you didn't know!

Cassie Mae said...

Sounds like a good short story idea ;)

fishducky said...

WOW!...just WOW!

Sarah Ahiers said...

Umm, i would seriously read a novel about this person and their situation

Janie Junebug said...

Excellent and interesting. I think you could expand it.

Love,
Janie

Dave said...

It is what it is, but it is what I like as well.

I'm visiting to primarily to shamelessly promote The Nineties Blogfest on the blogs of everybody that took part in the Noughties Blogfest. I'd love it if you'd sign up and join us on the 15th of October to talk about your favourites from the decade.

Dave
Dave Wrote This

Kato Kaka said...

That was creepy. In a wonderfully written, you are awesome kind of way.

Jay Noel said...

Good stuff! The scratching is creepy.

Dave said...

I'm visiting primarily to shamelessly promote The Nineties Blogfest on the blogs of everybody that took part in the Noughties Blogfest. I'd love it if you'd sign up and join us on the 15th of October to talk about your favourites from the decade.

Dave
Dave Wrote This

Indigo Roth said...

Damn, loved this. Nicely done.

Juli said...

I think that may be why I'm more of a people person. :)

Scope said...

You should write for "Revolution". They could use a good writer.

jabblog said...

Doesn't bear thinking about. I doubt I'd last six days, let alone sixty-three.

Rachel Morgan said...

Hahaha! I could really imagine Gollum at the end there ;) Very good.

Dave said...

Sorry for the double post.

Donna Hole said...

Love it; lets see more :)

......dhole

Sheena-kay Graham said...

This was great. Nice use of the bombs. Sorry about losing your food.